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PostPosted: Tue Apr 23, 2019 11:38 am 
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Hi, everyone!

Opened this up so I can hopefully get feedback from you all. It's been a while since I've written anything properly and I'm just hoping that you all are enjoying my foray back into fanfic.

Love, Mia x x x


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2019 3:49 am 
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Ok, once I got over you changed some of the pairings and regulated some of Star Trek regulars to 3rd or 4th class characters and I like it, it's a fast paste story. The only request I would make work on the flow of the story, it got a little choppy.
With all that said, when's the next chapter?
Rick


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2019 6:01 am 
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Hi, Rick.

I've set the regulars up like that so they can be more of a guiding presence to other characters, not the main influence of the story. I tried to make it flow, but clearly needs more work. I've got to admit, I'm still struggling somewhat. Next chapter coming soon, I promise!

Love, Mia x x x


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 24, 2019 7:55 am 
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I will try and read this when I get spare time and leave you feedback but mega busy at the moment, the main thing is to keep going Mia and your mojo will return xx


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 26, 2019 6:01 pm 
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Hi, hi!

I've written a little more today. Had a sad day, though. Ava lost her bag whilst up in town, so now her model starships are gone. She collected the Star Trek magazines that come with the die-cast ships. Her Saber, Steamrunner and Norway are now gone. Spent two hours searching the shops we went to, but no sign. One sad little princess. Got her home and watched Voyager then First Contact. After a quick read she's gone to bed.
Now I can try to get some more written!

Love, Mia x x x


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 26, 2019 7:04 pm 
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Hugs to the little commander.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 27, 2019 3:48 am 
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That’s a pity for her Mia, are you on Facebook? Maybe you could post on a local forum, it’s a long shot but some kind soul may have found them and will hand them in xx

Keep up the great work and give Ava a hug from me xx


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PostPosted: Thu May 02, 2019 8:13 am 
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Hi, everyone!

The next part is posted. I hope you enjoy.

Love, Mia x x x


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PostPosted: Thu May 02, 2019 3:07 pm 
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Nicely done, you corrected the flow issue.


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